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    sounds good. I would however make two changes. when you say the films patriot games.... you say patriot games twice. also the sentence "He is the master of the military thriller." is a bit redundant and should also be removed IMHO. Other then that its a really good bio.

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    Quote Originally Posted by dejolly View Post
    sounds good. I would however make two changes. when you say the films patriot games.... you say patriot games twice. also the sentence "He is the master of the military thriller." is a bit redundant and should also be removed IMHO. Other then that its a really good bio.
    Thanks for the help. I haven't had much sleep lately, and my attention span is suffering, obviously. I'll make the changes ASAP.


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    Also be sure you look into the authors of the net series as he wasn't involved in all of them. There is a few series out that he attaches his name ot but doesn't actually do any of the writing. Just giving you a heads up.
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    Sounds good, let us know how it turns out.
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